For the month of April, I am participating in 30 days of #verselove poetry writing with Dr. Sarah J. Donovan's Ethical ELA.
Today's poetry inspiration was about writing a strong title for a poem, and was offered by Stefanie Boutelier.
The poem I wrote is on the 'lighter' side (after writing a couple intense ones in recent days). I have three ideas for titles:
This I Have Not Missed
It Snakes Up On You
I’ve Been Down This Road Before
Here's the poem I wrote, as we made our way through traffic -
snaking our way down the interstate
weaving stop start slink slither
weaving stop start slink slither
traffic stretches out languidly thenabruptly coils in tight blind curves
heavy-bodied highway slowing to a crawl
periods of only subtle movement
periods of only subtle movement
serpentine locomotion, my spine bendsaverse to being so entwined
were the roads first to protest
the pandemic, it’s insistence on lying low?
the pandemic, it’s insistence on lying low?
I’ve lost my traffic muscle, limbless, softwhat lurks in the many miles ahead?
may these be the only snakes encountered
this weekend in the woods
this weekend in the woods
love the description
ReplyDelete"abruptly coils in tight blind curves
heavy-bodied highway slowing to a crawl"
And "traffic muscle" Can feel that instantly
And love the last thought of this being the only snake encountered! made me smile.