Sunday, April 19, 2020

Apr19Poetry - Off to Church



I'm trying something new, taking a risk this month - participating in
#VerseLove with Sarah Donovan,
hoping to write poetry every day this April.







Today's poetic inspiration comes from Alison Berryhill, who challenges us to remember a vivid visual moment from childhood, and to create a poem that has vivid colors and sounds. I decided to focus on our weekly ritual of getting out the door for Sunday Mass.


Off to Church


Every door of the old green station wagon
is opened wide, to fool the hot sun. 
Dressed in his blue suit and white button-down,
tie hanging loosely around his neck, to knot later, 
he takes one last puff of his cigar, and
bellows, “Load ‘em up!”
Hearing his roar from inside,
the ritual haphazard scramble to the car ensues,
quick tapping of our black dress shoes,
swoosh of elbows, knees, and backsides,
adorned in freshly-ironed fabric,
squeezing, squirming into the seats.
I scooch over to the middle of the middle,
give one tiny yelp as bare skin hits hot pale vinyl, and
adjust my blue and green plaid skirt under the exposed leg.
Sonny and Ralph clamber in from the rear, 
careening over the bench,
one random foot bumps me in the head before 
they flop down, sandwiching me,
their white dress shirts flowing loose 
from the belted waists of their khakis.
Mark and David race out,  
right at their heels, 
laying claim to the favored
rear-facing back bench,
now with younger brothers' footprints, and
swing this heavy door closed, with a slam.
Mom walks calmly and assuredly from the house,
sidles and settles into the front passenger seat,
holding the skirt of her soft, blue dress, demurely.
Dad climbs into the driver's seat,
stamps out his cigar in the ash tray,
vrooms the engine.
It's Sunday, and we are off to church.

3 comments:

  1. gayle sands, from Sarah Donovan's 30 Days of Poetry website:
    Quick tapping, swoosh of elbows, knees and backsides. What a wonderful scene you paint!! And what a rollicking family you must have been. I think my favorite detail is the cigar…

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  2. Rachel Stephens, from Sarah Donovan's 30 Days of Poetry website:
    So fun! My favorite detail was: “I scooch over to the middle of the middle, / give one tiny yelp as bare skin hits hot pale vinyl, and / adjust my blue and green plaid skirt under the exposed leg.” Definitely a familiar sensation 🙂

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  3. Ah yes, the wonderful details, you paint a wonderful picture. The image that stood out to me was you in the middle seat on the hump. Guessing it was cuz you are the girl and didn't get priority over boys even though you were not the youngest as you said, the middle in the middle. I also liked the commanding words of your father while your Mom stayed in her own world.

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